A Persuasive Text

Why is corruption banned?

Corruption is a profit thing for several people in this country. Someone who commits corruption is called corrupter. Unfortunately it is sometimes done by the member of Indonesian house of representative. Some corrupters can corrupt much money from the tax income. They commit together. Due to committing corruption, they can make almost their dreams come true. By committing corruption some corrupter are able to buy a new and luxurious car of the most famous brand. In addition they can buy some newest apartments in metropolis even more, they, who are taking-money without permitting from the public, can continue their son’s good-education abroad. Moreover they, this honorable criminal, are able to go pilgrimage to Mecca, Middle East. Those are amazing, aren't they?

 The case of corruption is untold. Every single day when we are watching television, the news is always about this one. Because of corruption, corruptor can bribe the judge and he can earn much money from this. It is good enough, they have the same advantage. In addition some polices will get chance on catching the corrupter. And they will absolutely get reward of this.


Beside the good fact above, some negative effects of committing corruption are quite tragic. The budget planning should have to apply for the public’s education to develop the education lost out. The free medicine is nothing. As the result, the poor could not continue studying at the next level and get appropriate treatment in hospital. Many hungers all around the region pass away without eating for several days. That is not all over, more and more the rate of crime increase. One by one the public create their self to become the poor. All of those are the reasons why the government and the whole religion in the world should ban corruption.